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knife and fork through a mineral water glass in my favourite ristobar

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A Mobile Telephone Camera image.
In Rome, during a lunch break in my favourite RISTOBAR.

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Eurydice's picture

I don't want to be cruel, but I find this image is simply a snapshot and not of great photographic value. I can see how you found the water bubbles to be interesting or how the flatware can be seen and is skewed by the perspective through the glass, bu the fact that the object that is most in focus is the napkin, really breaks this for me. I do like the idea of the refraction but you really should use what interested you and focus on making that the primary focus.

marson's picture

Hey Manuel, try setting up this scene again at home and use your good camera. I like the concept, but too blurry.

LosdaBear's picture

I need to agree with the previous posts. I would try to redo this at home with a better camera. Needs a lot more sharpness.

Carl

Dex's picture

Well. I'm going away from the others, I see some precision, the edge of the knife and napkin, the Hitchcockesque fork, the angular play of the napkin in real world and through water, the reflected red and balanced darkness........ who is going to eat there? that's just my thoughts, but likely I will remember this image longer than many others..........

marson's picture

Well, I would agree that it is a good quality camera phone.