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every passing thing

Posted February 2, 2010 - 10:36am by manuelgordiani
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I would like an extensive critique of my image please.

A Mobile Telephone Camera image, using NOKIA N95.
In Barcelona, waiting for the metrò to stop.

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by Timelode - Feb 2 2010 - 3:43pm

I like it. Very urban.

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by marson - Feb 8 2010 - 10:43pm

I like the composition.

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by manuelgordiani - Feb 9 2010 - 5:41am

thanks so much

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by manuelgordiani - Feb 9 2010 - 5:41am

thank you thank you.

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by Eurydice - Feb 12 2010 - 12:45pm

I like the movement of the train behind and the man just standing very oblivious to everything as he casually waits for his train. I do think you should have taken a step back and included his feet in the shot.